New Prologue Page #4
Jan11
The conversion is good! The Hale Huskies are up by two points!
Ah, it seems that Sabrina has a lot of respect for the people that coach her up. If you’re looking for more stuff written by Peter Vine, be sure to check out Hard-Graft.net!
Voting Incentive!
Some impending drama coming up on Friday? Vote to find out!
They take the lead! Excellent.
How long is the prologue? It’s entertaining in its own way, but it doesn’t feel like Rival Angels. Getting antsy for the main story.
As long as it takes…..the big question I have is what point does Albone plan to make with this. I knwo a spin off….Rival Rugy.
Over halfway done. Peter’s got a plan and a point to all of this. Oh yeah, the voting incentive might give you an idea of things heating up. 😉
VICTORY!!
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*humfph*
Victory or Death!
LOL, not quite yet.
Victory or Celery!
So does it bother you when people point out mistakes on your comic page?
And where do you come up with all your ideas?
The ‘where do you get your ideas’ always makes me laugh a little. Pointing out my mistakes is good. It makes sure that the print version is tip top.
I’ve given up trying to figure out where the cat girls get their notions. One thing is clear. They live in a different world.
A beautiful, silly world. XD
Why can I just imagine Mr. Jones sounding like the Late Burgess Meredith?
I’ll get the conversion on you, high school Sabrina. Convert you from a…sports nut into a…wrestler?
I got nothing. 😛
XD
Coaches always get angry and shouty. It’s in their job description.
Small point – in frames one and two, orange are clearly playing right-to-left (the conversion, then running back) – but in the bottom frame the pink team are playing right-to-left. Obviously this picture could be from the other side of the field, but to have your viewpoint switch 180 degrees for no obviousl reason is mildly confusing.
There’s a filmmaking technique, the 180 degree rule that talks about this. The characters can switch which side of the line they’re on as long as it’s been established with a wider shot, as opposed to having a close up of Sabrina on the left side and then a closeup of Sabrina on the right. Your point is valid though in that I could have been more creative in keeping each team facing the same side.