Rival Angels Page 89-Proclamation (11 Comments)Comments on:

By: Salazen

Salazen — Fri, 25 Jul 2008 07:15:03 +0000

But M.G.C. that would not be Ultragirl. That spitting in the face stuff I mean. Ultragirl is a babyface. She needs to act like it. She’s been acting like a Tweener lately. That’s the core of her advice. Ultragirl -was- a confident and aggressive wrestler without ever sacrificing her beliefs and her drive to succeed and doing it fair and legit. She hasn’t been any of those things lately.

By: anon y mouse

anon y mouse — Fri, 25 Jul 2008 06:44:31 +0000

MEOW! They’re in pink; interesting. Not what I would have pictured at first, but it works, too.

-A mouse

By: albone

albone — Thu, 24 Jul 2008 00:42:23 +0000

Brooke’s a lot of things but a witty exchanger isn’t one of them. XD Thanks for the critique I think the leg of Krystin kind of throws it off. It kind of hits the weird spot on my perspective grid. And actually her arm would be really long like that. I found the tron is a nice touch to the environment and I’m glad you dig it.

By: Jamie - 67th Avenue

Jamie - 67th Avenue — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 16:16:27 +0000

“Declawed!” heh. i have a feeling brooke spent the last 30-45 minutes thinking that one up…

panel 4 is good, but krystin looks a little off to me. maybe her perspective or the visible hand being swung forward with the forefront leg… i dunno.

the second panel is awesome. nice perspective and with a little of the belles on the tron. tron’s awesome.

By: albone

albone — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 16:02:02 +0000

Welcome Salazen!

I’m glad that you love the story and you really came at a great time with the fight card about to start up. The ‘normal’ 10-count is lame. With the action that I like to put into Rival Angels, there’s no way that 10 seconds is enough time. And you’re right about the feds that bother with counting when it suits the angle.
Right on about Sabrina and Sun. Your take on Sun is pretty solid, just wait til she fights School Sara Valentine, especially with the perceived Hogan-ness. I’m going to have a T-shirt with NINJA’D on it. Haha!
Krystin does have an uphill battle to climb, plus she’s kind of non-plussed with the crowd so that’s not doing her any favors. The grumpy thing is kind of endearing to us as readers, but not so much with the fans. And Brooke, well, tis probably going to get worse for her before it gets better which is purposefully cryptic and make a lot more sense later on. She’s a fun heel.
Your strategy for Krystin and Brooke seems way better than what they have cooked up (Need No Strategy) but we’ll see how it goes. Krystin can do some damage if she gets her hands on The Catigirls and we know Brooke could probably break them in two if she gets a chance. All about teamwork in this match.
Glad to have you on board and thanks for the comment.