What’s this got to do with the World Wildlife Fund? Yeah, I know that’s not what you mean.

And thank you for the critique as well, I always appreciate the feedback because its really the only way if I’m doing something right (or wrong). As to the wishlist, I can tell you that a leather strap match is coming, but I can’t say that its coming soon. I feel something like that sort of match needs the proper buildup. Injuries will certainly play into Rival Angels because I couldn’t realistically not bring it up.
By the way, I really dig your Nightgig.com site. The zoomline tutorial was criminally easy to understand and something I’ll be using in the future.

The characters are all well developed, their personalities coming through especicially in matches. Sometimes I think the art isn’t consistent, like in the last few pages Sabrina was looking a little chubby in the abdomen while she doesn’t normally.

Here’s my wish list.

I want to see a leather strap match, I always thought that would be a great, relatively low risk, match for women in WWF.

I’d also like to see you address safety issues, like sterilizing the ring after matches, and injuries and stuff.

Lunch all around Prince Charming, coming up. Vincent’s just glad he’s not unconscious right now.

Thanks Jamie, glad you dug the page. And I’m glad that panel 4 worked out, I was at a loss for hot to show it, and bam! it came to me. I’ve been meaning to work in a flashback-y type panel for a while, so I’m glad the last panel worked out too. Yep, good eyes, that is Vincent’s bike in panel 1!

I thought the colours were very nice. Another well drawn page. I really like the background in panel 4, the cut-through of brooke listening in, and sabrina’s remember-ness.

Bottom line, though. neither chick should go for vincent. he’s a putz. is that his bike, by the way, in the first panel?