Comments on: Rival Angels-Page 50!

By: M.G.C.

M.G.C. — Fri, 25 Apr 2008 06:45:58 +0000

looking on this episode.. I kinda pity Sabrina. in her position, looking Knockout, unconsciously, but that’s what tough love is, ehehehe.. and since every crowd loves her, tough love, and since she’s the main character, she should suffer more in my point of view..

By: Dan

Dan — Thu, 24 Apr 2008 10:58:44 +0000

Congrats on 50 pages, Alan! AWESOME! And hey, your work is improving rapidly through this process. For example, that last pages was the best I’ve ever seen your line-weights look. Hell, the storytelling is getting stronger and more fluid–even just in this match.

My one recommendation at this point would be to vary the camera angles a bit. Personally, I think we’re gonna need an establishing/med-long shot to get the whole scene somewhere in the next page or two, and IMHO, switching between those perspectives (med-long and close/bust) will drive a bit more immediacy to the action.

And yeah, the poster who said that this is gonna make the intra-house dynamics interesting… he was right on!

By: albone

albone — Thu, 24 Apr 2008 10:12:42 +0000

Thanks Prestwick, and I think you’re right!

Prince Charming, LMAO!

MGC, I would think that if Sabrina got nailed with those moves in succession, she would not be able to kick out. That’s a pretty rough combination you cooked up there!

By: M.G.C.

M.G.C. — Wed, 23 Apr 2008 23:15:22 +0000

hmmmm. Piledrive quiete deadly move, but Brooke is strong girl, she could done it better and more devastating than a piledriver. what if Brooke double powerbomb and then a devasting sitdown powerbomb at the end, do you think, it’s light out for Sabrina, 1.2.3?

By: PrinceCharming

PrinceCharming — Wed, 23 Apr 2008 22:48:32 +0000

Congrats alan :_ “Vince,heck orton take a look at true greatness….rival angels! “Exhales,followed by a gay model pose”.