Page 50
Apr23
Yahoo! Fifty Pages! Can I get a ‘hell yeah?’
I know a LOT of you have hit the fifty page mark before, but its sincerely the first time I’ve ever done it, and inside of 4 months too!
Okay back to the match. Sabrina takes a wicked piledriver, but is able to kick out and survive, a lot in part of Brooke’s nonchalant pin attempt. If I’m not mistaken this is the second pin attempt of the match.
Sabrina’s out, Krystin’s still down, Brooke’s arguing with the ref, and where the hell is Sun?
Thanks everyone for reading, commenting and critiquing Rival Angels for the first 50 pages, I’m going to do my best to improve on these next 50.
And those of you just coming on, check out the beginning of the match on page 35!
Awesome!!! the episode is getting better and better in every update. I never thought to see Sabrina lights out for a while. hahaha. very nice
congratulation Alan, for the first 50 pages. here you “Hell Yeah!!” “Bow down to the king”
Brooke, should done the pile driver twice and then vertebreaker, Sabrina won’t get up from that, even if Brooke did a cocky cover on Sabrina.
Now, now, what is that Shinobi Sun gonna do? Atomic fission on Sabrina? or maybe to Krystin? or maybe dropkick to Brooke? just don’t let Brooke catches Sun on mid-air, Brooke is strong, she already gorilla press slam once. Or maybe Sabrina might rolled up Brooke from behind. for the three count. I notice in episode 20, Brooke wasn’t hurt after the match, I think Brooke just came out short last match, a role up cover maybe, it might happen this time again.
it’s nice to see Sabrina first loss in Rival Angel, 🙂
Sun for the WIN….WIN!!!
Again, there are no cheer on the audience, in for TWO!!! When Sabrina kicked out, no one cheer.
Remembering back in episode 21. Loretta Diaz, finished Sabrina off with a Tombstone piledriver, Pedigree. these two moves damage the head, so I think Sabrina weakness is hitting in the head, 🙂
Krystin and now Sabrina down with two count. who next? or no more two count, just the win….
SUN FOR THE WIN!!
I second the “Hell yeah!” and congratulations on fifty pages.
I must admit I for one am amazed anyone would be able to come back after a pile driver and yes Brooke was very sloppy in her pin attempt. But I doubt Brooke would have won even if she had made a better attempt. I believe Sun would have “dropped in” on both Brooke and Sabrina if it had been a better cover.
The problem now, as I see it is this: Krystin is out from both pain and a knee injury no matter how short term, this match is over for her I believe. Sun would be foolish to attack Brooke at this moment, because she endangers the offical, so she would be unable to win with him out of the way. That leaves an attack on Sabrina as the most likely event. That is understandable but then both Sun and Brooke would lose.
For example: Sun drops down on Sabrina. She goes for the cover. The official pushes past a shocked Brooke to count. Brooke enraged attacks Sun and saves Sabrina, because she wants her for herself. While Sun cannot match Brooke’s strength, her skill would keep her away mostly from Brooke’s attacks and wear Brooke down. But all Brooke needs is one or more effective strikes to defeat Sun. They wear each other out, while Sabrina rests and regains her strength. “Ultra Girl” then comes up when one weaken fighter has the other pinned or about to submit, she for example drop kicks someone in the back of the head and then pins either the one she attacked or the other downed wrestler. Win Ultra Girl.
Question/Comment: Do all Rookies have to live at the same house? If so regardless of who wins this is going to be an even more interesting comic than before.
it’s kinda nice, what if Brooke Won this match, I mean Brooke really injuried Sabrina with the piledriver in this 50 episode. then win the 3 count.
Sun will stated this “I just Brooke Sabrina’s Neck” heheheh. OMG!!!
Good point there Mike, the danger is that Sun face off Brooke, Sun surely get crushed.. I mean Literary crushed. look what Brooke did to Sabrina. in the past, Brooke choked slammed and Gorilla press slam Sun. So Sun might dropkick Brooke from behind again, then with the move Sabrin will recover few of her strenght, still danger zone for Sun. kinda suggest if Sun stay put for a while, and wait what will happen, but I noticed Sun, she’s rushed everything. So I might say, Sun will atomic fusion Sabrina and for the pin.. And Also for the win..
Sun “Lil Dragon” Wong… Winner.. Winner…
Sorry, Brooke will stated “I just Brooke your neck” not Sun..
Hmm.. kinda think of it, it’s better Sun focusing on Krystin’s legged, so injuring her leg more.. Atomic fusion of Krystin’s leg, or maybe get a steel chair and clip it on Krystin leg, then get another steel hair and hit it on Krystin. hhahahah.. if Krystin is officially injuries, like the medics will go and get her. it will be official triple treat match.
now what will be Sabrina’s feeling, will she became berserk, for letting one of their roomate injuried. If Sabrina gone berserk, and the crowd Booooed Sabrina!! I vote for Sabrina. hahahaha
Great page. I hope Sun hits brooke with a frankensteiner flips her right over and wraps her up for a tight pin.
Thanks everyone! It feels great to be at 50 pages and I have a lot more to go.
MGC, great observations as usual. I see you’re pulling for Sun to win it all and wanting to see the Atmoic Fission! It is a pretty wicked move. 😉 Sun is looking to strike again, and right now, Brooke’s got no clue where she is.
Mike, awesome observations on the match. Sabrina’s a tough cookie, and who knows what a tight leghook pin by Brooke would’ve netted? The match has more to come so you’ll see if any of your predictions come around. XD
To answer your question, No, all rookies do not need to live with each other. It hasn’t been shown what other rookies have to do as far as living conditions, but technically, Loretta Diaz (from page 21) is still a rookie and she doesn’t live with the other girls. Yeah, its going to be interesting in the rookie household after this match.
Thank you Matt! Glad to see you’re still reading the comic! I’m not saying anything about Sun’s move, but that it will be resolved on Friday!
Awesome page and congrats on the 50 mark.
Im hoping Sun to fly in with something dangerous and get the win = )
great work keep it up
Congrats, Albone. 50 pages is no small feat.
Everybody knows Sun has the best finisher, and it’d be nice to see her hit it before the match is through.
Thanks Adam! You’ll see for yourself on Friday. 😉
Thank you Primus21. Will do.
Justin, I know it man. I’ve had plenty of projects end way before 50 so its a personal best both in quality and quantity. The Atomic Fission IS a monster move. Seems like more than a few people want to see it!
Congratulations on fifty pages!
And hey! Whats that coming over the hill, is it an Su-un? Is it a Su-un?! 😀
Congrats alan :_ “Vince,heck orton take a look at true greatness….rival angels! “Exhales,followed by a gay model pose”.
hmmmm. Piledrive quiete deadly move, but Brooke is strong girl, she could done it better and more devastating than a piledriver. what if Brooke double powerbomb and then a devasting sitdown powerbomb at the end, do you think, it’s light out for Sabrina, 1.2.3?
Thanks Prestwick, and I think you’re right!
Prince Charming, LMAO!
MGC, I would think that if Sabrina got nailed with those moves in succession, she would not be able to kick out. That’s a pretty rough combination you cooked up there!
Congrats on 50 pages, Alan! AWESOME! And hey, your work is improving rapidly through this process. For example, that last pages was the best I’ve ever seen your line-weights look. Hell, the storytelling is getting stronger and more fluid–even just in this match.
My one recommendation at this point would be to vary the camera angles a bit. Personally, I think we’re gonna need an establishing/med-long shot to get the whole scene somewhere in the next page or two, and IMHO, switching between those perspectives (med-long and close/bust) will drive a bit more immediacy to the action.
And yeah, the poster who said that this is gonna make the intra-house dynamics interesting… he was right on!
looking on this episode.. I kinda pity Sabrina. in her position, looking Knockout, unconsciously, but that’s what tough love is, ehehehe.. and since every crowd loves her, tough love, and since she’s the main character, she should suffer more in my point of view..